Overall Great
The choice of artstyle made this unique and abstract. It was a nice choice. The animation was smooth, save for a couple parts. One thing I really enjoyed about it was the use of ambience in the bathroom, it made it feel more authentic. Shifting camera angles was a great touch, and so were all the little NG references, but that's expected on Pico Day.
My only issues with it was how it seemed slow at times, especially during any part where they were running. It made it hard to get into the action. My other issue would be the music at the opening. It's overused and didn't fit well with that animation or the rest of the movie.
But obviously you got talent, (WINK).