I understand what you were going for...
But I found the scratching more annoying and it made the song somewhat, erratic. Also, it didn't always keep it's beat. At points the transition seemed sudden. Plus that part at the end may have been a mistake, but you could have taken it off.
But hey, I still like it, maybe I'll use it in a movie.
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