No background, he's incredibly deformed, the lines are jagged and I know that isn't intentional. The angle of the eyes go against the angle of the face, and unlike the original character, I can't see any arms.
The angle of the feet don't match, it's sloppy and the right hand looks like shit. Plus your claiming "copywrites" on a character that isn't yours. PLUS PLUS, Shadow is a gay Sonic recolor.
9 just cuz I love the normal tankmen design.
I liked the use of colors, and the overall style. But since when do people use lightning to light candles? lol
And I saw this on the Behemoth website, kind of surprised you drew it.
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